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You're a dark
             broken
             city.
Smoke trailing over a
damaged shoulder

When we dreamt
in our flying inspirations
on the doorstep of tomorrow
"I    d r e a m t    of you."

Because you're a bleached peice of paper
    cut into a jagged little shape
    stuffed into a train carriage
and taken away from me.

"You should have seen her,
It was like a memory
of something that might have been better
     than here...
     or anywhere."

I love an echo.
    silent vibrations
    in a dark city
of a girl.

It was a slow countdown
   to the birth
   which turned out to be
   a silent embryo of a dream
that burst into a nightmare.

I shake with hypothermia
                  and the warmth you stole away.
Memories shatter without dignity
like the people I once knew.

I breathe for you,
I keep breathing
For a chance of something better than here.

You're like newsprint
stained on fingertips
And I love you...
       I always will.
©2006-2010 ~Memphis-Poison
:iconmemphis-poison:

Author's Comments

This was in my other account, now it's here.

"Your city is on the move.
Would you hate me if I was shallow?

I don't like writing discriptions for my poems
Because I suck at it

This relates to people I once knew
and things that might have happened once...in a different place. "

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:icon45tr0:
Christ-fuck. this is beautiful.
This whole poem speaks to me on a very, very personal level, but it was;

"It was a slow countdown
to the birth
which turned out to be
a silent embryo of a dream"...

...that made me cry.

--
"He that would sacrifice liberty for security deserves neither" - Benjamin Franklin
:iconmemphis-poison:
-stunned-
I'm pretty sure my heart stopped for a couple of seconds after I read that.

Thank you SO MUCH for your comments and faves and the watch.
You've made my day :)

--
"A place to momentarily house all the abstractions."
:icon45tr0:
You're welcome. you really are talented, and this is a damned beautiful poem.

--
"He that would sacrifice liberty for security deserves neither" - Benjamin Franklin
:iconhungerforperfection:
How can i have not ever read this before? :jawdrop: These lines you have written here my dear stab like a syringe and are so v e r y powerful.

Because you're a bleached peice of paper
cut into a jagged little shape
stuffed into a train carriage
and taken away from me.


- this part is amazing

--
- annihilated with one twist of my trick scissors -
:iconkillmeharder:
why the hell isn't a comment from me here.
This is insane.

I can't believe II have not commented. This was and remains one of my favourite things to read. I find it to be some kind of string, wrapped rather delicately around my heart, and this, this slowely pulls it out.
I hope I have at least a favourited this, I am back here because I went looking for it.

--
Touch your thighs I'm the lonely one
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:iconkillmeharder:
oh good, I have.

--
Touch your thighs I'm the lonely one
[link]
:iconmemphis-poison:
:D

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"A place to momentarily house all the abstractions."

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